T2+Explain



 L.I. We are learning to use words that contain cause & effect.S.C. My writing
 * will use words like because, as a result of, therefore

You know alot of information, used present text and awesome cause and effect work ^.^ (Frankie)

**Thanks Jordan, this is a good explanation. You have clearly began with a general statement and sequenced your writing in a logical order. You can make an evaluation or interesting comment as you concluding paragraph. I can identify a number of cause & effect words such as "it evaporates" or "will drop".**

**Target 16.05.2011** **To be able to identify and and explain when and where a complex sentence has been used, proof read and edit work carefully e.g. 'of' instead of 'or'.**

=== L.I. We are learning to use the structure of explain to give an explanation of what light is and to use present tense. ===

=== S.C. My writing === 
 * has a general statement at the beginning
 * is sequenced in time order or clearly explains in a logical order
 * is written in present tense

FRANKIE: Hey awesome Jordan. Great use of words and cool general statement!!! :L

__Wednesday 4 May 2011__

Light!!!

Light is radiant energy that travels very fast through the air. Light is all over the world. The universe. Most light is able to be seen through the human eye but some light can not. light eliminates darkness.

Light can be natural and also artificial. Artificial light is man made, like light bulbs and lasers. Natural light is when nature creats it. Substances like fire and lightning are natural.

<span style="font: normal normal normal 18px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px;">Light speed is how fast light