T2+Rimu+Novel

Tuesday 12 July 2011

www.wix.com/francesb30/RimuNovel

Friday 8 July 2011



Tuesday 5 July 2011



Tuesday 5 July 2011

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Thursday 30 June 2011

I think the book launch/novel has been going awesome. Changing my cover has been a bit of a mish. I have three copies and I'm not sure which one to pick!!! :'(



Thursday 30 June 2011

I have added onto the rimu story today. I have rewriten sentances and reworded some.

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Tuesday 28 June 2011

Today for the book launch I charcoled my design for the book cover on an A4 peice of paper. I think that the picture doesn't look as good as the sketch though. Maybe it would look better if it was cut out of paper??? Hmmmmmm



Friday 24 June 2011

Today I edited the story. I rearanged some sentence so that not all of them start with 'I'. I also aadded a bit of descreption in the text as well, eg: "The sand squashing through my toes slowed me down"

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Thursday 23 June 2011

I changed and edited a few sentences. I added on to the paragraph and made it make sence.

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Tuesday 21 June 2011

I have been editing the story and made a few changes. I foregot to take a screen shot before but it wasn't the best. I inclueded the train bridge and how they got to the beach!!!

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17 June 2011

Today me and my awesome partener Mitchell, edited and change sentences to make them better.

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Thursday 16 June

Revising: I think that the story is going very well. I wrote some descripted language in the paragraph and fixed up some spelling errors.

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__Thursday 9 May 2011__